Whisper to God your prayers
to keep away the nightmares
Then dare to look inside
in that place where you hide
So wipe away the tears
and tell me all your fears
to compare them all to mine
you'll watch me cross the line
Show me the wrists that you slit
and tell me about your pit
then look deep into my eyes
and see where real pain lies
I know you can't compare
with my evil stare
So silence to all your lies
I'm deaf to all your cries
For you I can't feel
because your pain's not real
You may think you're dead
but it's all inside your head
Let time remove your tears
and get yourself away from here
because it's you that I seek
to feed the small & weak
It's now things turn bleak…
I really like the poem it says a lot. It's somethin I'd write as a song.
This is my favorite poem of all time. It always puts things into perspective for me. Makes me think of how bad other people have it in the world and that my itty bitty problems aren't actually that bad.
this poem rocks it brings up old memories thati had it bad but it could get better, but not now
i like this poem…it has alot of meaning…
I love it its a big eye opener to alot of emotions thesedays. speacially between a guy and a ditzy little girl thats in love with him
that was a great poem alot of feelings and time were put into it I don't read alot of poems like that anymore from any new poets.
All's I can say is WOW! This poem blows my mind… I'm hard to please with poetry, but this poem takes the cake!
kickass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhh loved it !!!
this is the best poem i've read in a while.
I think you have alot of talent and shouldn't stop there. I'd like to hear my of your poetry and think that everyone likes it!
you're a great person…YOU ROCK, SO SMILE!
love lil kt
I luv it.I think it's gorgeous babe. Hang in there!!
hey solder on m8 i luved it
I LOVE THIS ONE….BUT I LOVE U MORE
I really loved this poem. I can't describe what I want to say in words or in writing, but it was
GREAT GREAT.. ur the best hun..
this poem is pretty good, but it lacks depth
That was awesome!!!! Totally blew my mind. I don't know what this Caleb guy is talking about. Thanks your poem opened my eyes Hang in there hun, Luv yah, Tara
gre-at job! i loved itt! it was really well written and im glad i read it. thanks so much,again, raven. you're awesome. your poem meant: some pain you only feel because you want to. It may seem strange at first, but it DOES make sense to me. Some people don't know what real pain feels like and only pretend to.
i thought this poem was really really amazing…. you really made an impact on me through this and with that i have to say tht your writing was inspiring.
i no just wat this poem is saying i have a few frends that think they have problems and i just dont think they know wat real pain is,some times they realy piss me off thank u 4 this poem:)
This poem is soo deep if you know what pain is and you know what going throught it is you apreciate this poem far more than if you dont… i love this poem
I love this poem because it is very revealing of ..its anger..lol. and whoever made this poem should try and enter poem contests …you seem very talented
It rocked my socks hardcore i never thought that someone who feels the same way as me would be able to express feelings like that.I never would have thought of that
this poem expresses the way that we feel i could have never thought to put it in these words bye now
At the beginning I thought that the poem was about a visit to the phycologist….lol, was very well written….. I wish I could show you one of my poems….they are ok I guess
no one can compare… ?
Wow man! I can't even describe how this makes me feel it just realy (for lack of a better word) intense.
that is an awsome poem/lyrics. deep. keep writting!
Excellent piece! I really like the intensity. I feel such a connection with the words
it's deep it reminds me of a vampire.
This really deep. like you lost your friend or something
That is a really good paom and i can relate alot to it thanx for posting that
This poem made me laugh but i learned something
I am sorry to say, but ure poem really sucked. no offense. i really am not trying to be rude but u really need to be more open in ure poetry. lol. i hate to sound to critical. i believe that if u are going to make public of ure poetry, u should be able to withstand some critisicm be all people including the ones such as myself that u dunno. i live in dexter missouri, my number is 614-4568 the area code is 1573 if u would like to call. anyone……
charmine roper from kcc??? is this ur's???
This pome is my favort. Realy deep.I know how u feel
this my favorite poem.it is really deep,and beautiful…..
my god, that was………….beutifel. im almost crying