Anger #5

Whisper to God your prayers
to keep away the nightmares
Then dare to look inside
in that place where you hide

So wipe away the tears
and tell me all your fears
to compare them all to mine
you'll watch me cross the line

Show me the wrists that you slit
and tell me about your pit
then look deep into my eyes
and see where real pain lies

I know you can't compare
with my evil stare
So silence to all your lies
I'm deaf to all your cries

For you I can't feel
because your pain's not real
You may think you're dead
but it's all inside your head

Let time remove your tears
and get yourself away from here
because it's you that I seek
to feed the small & weak
It's now things turn bleak…

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38 Responses to Anger #5

  1. Victoria says:

    I really like the poem it says a lot. It's somethin I'd write as a song.

  2. Roxanne says:

    This is my favorite poem of all time. It always puts things into perspective for me. Makes me think of how bad other people have it in the world and that my itty bitty problems aren't actually that bad.

  3. gloria says:

    this poem rocks it brings up old memories thati had it bad but it could get better, but not now

  4. Hana says:

    i like this poem…it has alot of meaning…

  5. Stephanie says:

    I love it its a big eye opener to alot of emotions thesedays. speacially between a guy and a ditzy little girl thats in love with him

  6. john says:

    that was a great poem alot of feelings and time were put into it I don't read alot of poems like that anymore from any new poets.

  7. Kandy says:

    All's I can say is WOW! This poem blows my mind… I'm hard to please with poetry, but this poem takes the cake!

  8. claire says:

    kickass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhh loved it !!!

  9. shenoa says:

    this is the best poem i've read in a while.
    YOU ROCK!!

  10. kaitlin Eades says:

    I think you have alot of talent and shouldn't stop there. I'd like to hear my of your poetry and think that everyone likes it!
    you're a great person…YOU ROCK, SO SMILE!
    love lil kt

  11. Skye says:

    I luv it.I think it's gorgeous babe. Hang in there!!

  12. sum 1who knows u says:

    hey solder on m8 i luved it

  13. Charmine Roper says:


  14. Beth says:

    I really loved this poem. I can't describe what I want to say in words or in writing, but it was

  15. amanda says:

    GREAT GREAT.. ur the best hun..

  16. Caleb says:

    this poem is pretty good, but it lacks depth

  17. Tara says:

    That was awesome!!!! Totally blew my mind. I don't know what this Caleb guy is talking about. Thanks your poem opened my eyes Hang in there hun, Luv yah, Tara

  18. Emilie says:

    gre-at job! i loved itt! it was really well written and im glad i read it. thanks so much,again, raven. you're awesome. your poem meant: some pain you only feel because you want to. It may seem strange at first, but it DOES make sense to me. Some people don't know what real pain feels like and only pretend to.

  19. Lindz says:

    i thought this poem was really really amazing…. you really made an impact on me through this and with that i have to say tht your writing was inspiring.

  20. Baby Jade says:

    i no just wat this poem is saying i have a few frends that think they have problems and i just dont think they know wat real pain is,some times they realy piss me off thank u 4 this poem:)

  21. Meredith says:

    This poem is soo deep if you know what pain is and you know what going throught it is you apreciate this poem far more than if you dont… i love this poem

  22. brittany carnes says:

    I love this poem because it is very revealing of ..its and whoever made this poem should try and enter poem contests …you seem very talented

  23. Tom says:

    It rocked my socks hardcore i never thought that someone who feels the same way as me would be able to express feelings like that.I never would have thought of that

  24. Heather&Kristy says:

    this poem expresses the way that we feel i could have never thought to put it in these words bye now

  25. Drew says:

    At the beginning I thought that the poem was about a visit to the phycologist….lol, was very well written….. I wish I could show you one of my poems….they are ok I guess

  26. lex says:

    no one can compare… ?

  27. Nemis says:

    Wow man! I can't even describe how this makes me feel it just realy (for lack of a better word) intense.

  28. Tiffany says:

    that is an awsome poem/lyrics. deep. keep writting!

  29. forrest_spirit says:

    Excellent piece! I really like the intensity. I feel such a connection with the words

  30. aly.j.b.s says:

    it's deep it reminds me of a vampire.

  31. Tiffany says:

    This really deep. like you lost your friend or something

  32. bloodie wrist says:

    That is a really good paom and i can relate alot to it thanx for posting that

  33. whipping boy says:

    This poem made me laugh but i learned something

  34. cassie gaines says:

    I am sorry to say, but ure poem really sucked. no offense. i really am not trying to be rude but u really need to be more open in ure poetry. lol. i hate to sound to critical. i believe that if u are going to make public of ure poetry, u should be able to withstand some critisicm be all people including the ones such as myself that u dunno. i live in dexter missouri, my number is 614-4568 the area code is 1573 if u would like to call. anyone……

  35. kaitlin says:

    charmine roper from kcc??? is this ur's???

  36. ERICA says:

    This pome is my favort. Realy deep.I know how u feel

  37. ERICA says:

    this my favorite is really deep,and beautiful…..

  38. jeff says:

    my god, that was………….beutifel. im almost crying

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